I had been quietly watching my sons since
we began our quest for this “House of Joy”. That was what the King had named
our retreat home, the most ridiculous title he’s came up with to date. The way
he rushed all of my sons and I out was strange, especially since he had just
named my eldest son, Yudhistira, the heir to his throne.
I walked near the front of our group
with Yudhistira and one of the kingdom’s advisors, Vidura. We walked in tense
silence, lost in our own thoughts as the younger brothers chatted merrily
behind us. Yudhistira seemed suspicious of the king's intentions as well.
Vidura walked with us until we were
over halfway through our journey. All of the other elders and advisors turned
back hours ago.
In hushed tones, Vidura began
speaking to Yudhistira. He spoke of enemies and weapons not made of steel. Then
even quieter, Vidura whispered about wood and straw, followed by jackals,
earth, and stars. His words were unintelligible to me, but Yudhistira listened
intently.
Before Vidura left to return to the
king, Yudhistira nodded and said he understood. Well at least someone did.
After thinking about the strange
encounter I had witnessed I approached my son. “Yudhistira,” I whispered, “What
were you and Vidura saying? I couldn’t understand a word of it.”
Yudhistira glanced around nervously.
He relaxed again when he saw our servants were paying us no mind and his
brothers continued their chatting and games a safe distance behind us. “I’ll
explain later. But I fear in the next couple of days it will all become clear.”
I let the topic drop as we continued
on our journey.
***
It wasn’t long after when we arrived
at our destination, Varanavata. The crowds cheered at the sights of their
princes. I smiled as I watched Yudhistira greet some of the elders with a wide
smile. He looked so grand, so official, and rightly so. Someday my son would be
King.
When arrived at the Joy House, his
smile instantly disappeared. The home was spacious, plenty of room for my five
sons and myself. There was an unusual smell but I didn’t think much about it.
The architect of the home, Purochana, showed us around and helped us get
settled.
I couldn’t focus on anything but
Yudhistira’s dark expression as he inspected the house and watched Purochana suspiciously.
As soon as the architect was gone, Yudhistira pulled me aside.
“I thought I was just paranoid,” he
said, “but I fear I’m not. Mother, we are in danger here.” Yudhistira then
began to tell me about the message from Vidura and what he noticed in the Joy
House.
Short version: the king was scared
and wanted my sons and I out of the picture. Yudhistira had been warned by
Vidura that the king planned for Purochana to set fire to the Joy House one
night while we were sleeping. The walls of the home were filled with straw and
oil which would easily go up in flames.
I had worried about the king’s
intentions but never had I thought he would try to have me and his nephews
killed. Yudhistira obviously saw the panic in my face as he quickly continued. “We
have a plan,” he whispered. “A man is going to come and build a tunnel for us
to escape in. It will make it appear as though the king succeeded but we will
be free. But we must not let Purochana know. We have to act as though nothing
is wrong.”
I nodded and Yudhistira left me to
give the information to his brothers. It would take all of us to keep the plan
secret. And keeping it secret was the only way we would survive this trip.
***
For more than a week after, a man
snuck into the Joy House. In the room furthest from Purochana’s he dug a hole
and a tunnel from there. That would be our escape route when the time came. As
the date approached, Yudhistira became more and more anxious as he tried to
figure out how to keep Purochana from discovering our planned escape.
Yudhistira’s solution was we act
sooner and dramatically. He instructed me to throw a huge dinner feast for as
many people as we could fit into the Joy House. My sons kept Purochana
drinking, hoping he would be oblivious enough not wake until we were gone tonight.
After everyone went home and
Purochana was asleep, we made our way down to steep steps into the tunnel. I
was behind my three youngest boys. Above me I heard the urgent whispering of
Yudhistira and the second oldest, Bhima.
Bhima had a torch in his hand and
Yudhistira was watching him and pointing around the house. I had frozen on the
stairs. Within a minute, the smoke was nauseating and the fire crackled all
around. Yudhistira and Bhima both came rushing down the stairs, sealing the
hole above us.
“Mother,” Bhima said, “you should
have kept going.” They hurried me down the tunnel where the younger boys were
waiting.
“There’s a boat,” Yudhistira said, “at
the end. Vidura arranged it. It will take us somewhere safe.” We continued
making our way down the tunnel, the smell of smoke clinging to the three of us
even as we left the blazing fire behind.
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I wrote my story in Kunthi's perspective, who was the mother of the Pandavas. I kept most of the story the same but added some details particularly because of Kunthi's perspective as she watches her sons deal with the threat and find a way to escape.
Story Source: Narayan, R. K. (1978). The Mahabharata.
I like how you chose to tell this story from Kunthi’s perspective. I am sure that she must have not been very happy about being cast out of the kingdom with her beloved sons. I do like how much detail you were able to add about their search for the house, and their escape before it was set on fire. It was nice that you made the feel of the story kind of modern with your word choice, such as by saying “short version” before describing what was happening. Good job!
ReplyDeleteHey! What a wonderful story you wrote! I really enjoyed how you kept it in Kunthi's perspective and focused on the Pandavas. I thought they were really important in this book so far. You also added a lot of details in the story which was great but it was long. Although you pretty much kept the story pretty much the same and added more details. I think you did a great job on it. Keep up the good work! The picture you chose really fit the theme of your story as well!
ReplyDeleteThis story was so eerie! From the very beginning I could tell this wasn’t going to end well. The style in which you wrote your story was quite interesting – a narrative without any dialogue but was still so personal. I am glad you chose to write about this. I thought it was such an important and pivotal story in Mahabharata and your rendition captures the emotion and danger perfectly!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your ability to tell this story and set the mood from the very beginning. Your setup to the plot was done very well and the addition of your own details were outstanding. I am a big fan of using the same stories from the book but providing a lot of personal details which create a sense of personal writing touch within a story.
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