I watched as Dasaratha slept. His wife, Kausalya,
sat nearby. The old king shifted and tensed in his sleep. I knew he was
remembering me. The night that ended with him burning the bodies of my parents and me.
I wished, for his sake, that he didn’t have to go through
losing a son. I had seen what it did to my parents. When he killed me, it had
been an accident. But Rama’s exile was not one. Kaikeyi’s spite and fear had poisoned
her husband’s spirit. He would be dead by morning.
I thought back to that night, so many decades before. When
the king was a prince and I was just a child. That night contained many mixed
memories for me. Obviously, my death and watching my parents mourn and die was
not a happy occasion. However, when Indra welcomed me into the Heaven of Warriors, well that was an amazing. It wasn’t long before my parents joined me,
with their eyes and bodies repaired. I
thanked Dasaratha for that every day. He could have left my parents to die
slowly, wondering what had become of me. But he was a good man, one who made a
mistake but tried to fix it as best he could.
Everything had changed so suddenly that night. It had been a
normal day. My mother wanted water before bed. I usually don’t like going out
at night, but the sun had just set and the river wasn’t far. I’d taken our
water jar, and after kissing my mother and father, I promised to return shortly,
I left my home for the last time. After a short walk, I knelt down and dipped the jar into the
river. Branches crunched to my left and I began to stand, turning towards the
sound. Before I was upright, I saw something flying at me and felt the pain
through my chest. Next thing I knew I was lying in the dirt, looking up at the
stars.
“Who has killed me!?” I cried out, answered only by silence.
Then footsteps began coming towards me. In the moonlight stood the prince,
Dasaratha, looking pale and shaking.
He stared for a moment, as his face turned a sickly shade of
green and tears filled his eyes. He didn’t speak, but stood, staring at what he
had done to me. “Prince Dasaratha, have I wronged you in some way that made
you want me dead? My parents will now die too. They are blind and sick, unable
to move. They have never hurt anyone. Take out the arrow you have killed me
with.” Even as I spoke I could feel my life slipping away.
The prince approached me, leaning down to examine the wound.
I couldn’t see it, but I knew it was bad. “If I take it out,” he said slowly, “You
will die. I’ll leave it in and go find a doctor.”
He began to stand but I grabbed his wrist with the last of
my strength. “I’m not afraid of death. I don’t curse you, it was an accident.
But please release me. It’s too painful.” Dasaratha did as I asked and pulled
out the arrow.
Soon I was soaring to
heaven, being welcomed by Indra. “Child,” the god said, “You have died a
warrior’s death. Come and rest now.” I
watched as the prince found my parents, told them what he’d done and carried
them to my body. They saw me in the sky one last time before they died as well.
![]() |
Dasharatha and the Blind Boy's Family. Wikimedia. |
One reason I decided to use this story was because I thought the part in the story when Dasaratha sees the boy's soul's path going to heaven and being accepted into the heaven of heroes was a really cool touch to the story. I also chose this story because it is a great example of how karma works in Indian tradition. Lastly, it also explains Dasaratha's behavior after Rama is exiled, which in Naryayan's story, without the inclusion of the sotry of the Boy in the Forest, seemed a little overly dramatic.
Bibiography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way. P. 105-109
Great story! I can see your writing degree at work here! I really enjoyed reading the story from the boy’s point-of-view; it gave an interesting new spin to the events. Using the boy’s perspective really helped me relate to both him and his parents, which made th story feel more real. The only critique I have is most likely a typo. In the third paragraph it seems you didn’t finish this sentence, “However, when Indra welcomed me into the Heaven of Warriors, well that was an amazing.”
ReplyDeleteKelsey, I appreciate what you did with your tale. It is quite reasonable to anticipate that the boy who was killed would mourn the events that fell upon Dasaratha. As the course continues on, it seems like Ramayana is an awesome read for this course because of instances like this; so much happens in the text, and yet we’re still able to predict/describe what so many of the other characters’ experiences were.
ReplyDelete